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Mareep revamp,anything wrong with it?
 
six GSC revamps...
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the voltorb i had to remake at the last second so i might not be as good
c+c

uh, wrong image





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^soon to be sig
 
On growlithe, there is a lump of black that looks really odd.

The others look cool at first glance though. *rubs eyes* The darker white shading on voltorb looks really odd, I can't really explain it though.
 
Jewel Espeon said:
What I'm really wondering is where is the light source coming from? The fluff around the body and the head fluff have shading in different directions.
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I assumed they where coming from the same place. As the bottom part of the curl is under the top part, I shaded it like that. *goes to see how she can fix it*
 
H20firefly, your Corsola is... deformed. The Scisor doesn't look too shaded, either. I'm too lazy to write more.
 
*slaps the sprite*
Okay, Im'an ignore the deformedness. The streak of highlighting on it's right(our right, getting tired of this) coralthing goes down too far. Try chopping it off?
 
@ Colossal: Just a side comment but I've seen those Deoxys forms before(not sure where) and the sprites seem to be a big jump from your last post here.
 
May I please have criticism on this?

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@Colossal: I think Nin Nin lacks shading on the head. Maybe you should try adding some to make it better.
 
^Yeah, I think I've seen those Deoxys forms too...

Anyways, the fire on Smoguro and Smokill look 2D. Sparkplug doesn't look too shaded either... Don't feel like writing.
 
Colossal said:
Scratches: I haven't used any existing sprites to make these.

Dublo
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Nin Nin
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Sparkplug
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Smoguro
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Smoguro's evolution, Smokill
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New Deoxys forms:
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constructive criticism please.
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What a stupid, thieving, n00b. :D You just stole from one of the most well known spriters, Hark. (avengerofallpoesouls, harkie, darth harkie, daft hark)

http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/picture-post/some-fake-pokemon-game-sprites/t.33222695/
You can also see, (if you're on c spriting) his pokedex, which you stole from.
What a n00b. YOU MADE NONE OF THESE.
 
The last one is good but all of the others have an awkward looking head. Good splice though.
 
Ruffledfeathers said:
I was stupid enough to try to revamp green's mew. What do you think?

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it's good for a green mew revamp, but doesn't look the right because of the horrible base sprite. the head of the mew should be smaller, and mews limbs look awkward aswell. you should make the arms slightly smaller and give the legs joints because at the moment they look like tentacles.


anyway, a new sprite from me. my fake fire pokemon lember:
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