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  • Hey there, I'm glad you took the time to answer! I admit I was a little worried that you weren't replying, but in the end it didn't take that long for you to answer since I sent my message around a week ago, so all is good. :) Thanks for the VMs!

    I've been doing a lot of editing lately due to incorporating new ideas. I agree with you that it's best to edit only when the sections are ready, but editing is no mean feat! In reality, I've always had a little trouble editing works that I already had written, including academic pieces that I wrote in the past. It seems to me that the old text is so cohesive that adding or changing something is too invasive... Of course, adding is way easier because you can still make it work with what you've already written, but changing is a bit difficult. I had the idea of making the protagonist's power stem from her lineage instead of being something that "just happened", but I had to come up with a source that explained her powers. I then decided to add a character (her grandmother), which kept the protagonist's mother oblivious about the lineage thing. When I added this character I had to face the problem of making references to it in the material I already had so that it didn't feel like an edit but as integration; however, I didn't want to change what I had already written too much (I admit, due to laziness). In the end inserting a whole section in the middle of the story didn't work too well but it's better than rewriting the whole thing I guess.

    I've fallen victim to the people who said to write only when you have inspiration before! Indeed, that's something that doesn't work well. I've felt that many of the nice ideas I've had, I had while writing, so even in a bad day you theoretically could have a nice idea. One of the scariest things about writing for me is that things rarely go as planned. I very often think of writing something but what I put out is a little different and gives me different directions. It kinda forces you to think more sharply! I've had a little trouble handling all those different directions, though.

    Different media... I've thought of using proper handwriting before. I quite like to handwrite. I'm using the computer mostly though, because I... need to buy a notebook! It's something silly, really, that I don't have one, but I really don't. I've just recently moved to my new apartment and still haven't had the motivation to reequip my new home with survival tools like pencils, erasers and paper.

    I don't like those programs that give you warnings when you are taking too long to write because I like to feel absolutely relaxed when I'm writing, but I'll look into them just in case. :)

    I don't really have a deadline... Currently I'm on leave so I'm not working, but I end up wasting my time wandering around aimlessly on the internet, viewing videos and other things, so that I don't have a "fixed" time for writing. I'm horrible at following schedules! It could help me though, because a fixed time is a limit you impose on yourself and limits enable you to develop different skills. And, indeed, writing is VERY hard. I'm lucky that I can usually put out a lot of words in a short time and don't have any issues with grammar, but there are not a lot of people who can claim that. However, when you write fast you tend to repeat vocabulary as well as syntax very often (my most used construction is "A did that, but..."), which I have fallen victim to.
    Congrats on passing the referee test!

    I actually don't mind that I didn't pass; Negrek said the word "decent". That is the first time my test has been considered "decent".
    Hi Hiikaru! First of all I wish to say that I admire you being a reasonable person here in the forums, you're very likeable! Also, I've never seen someone end their sentences often with exclamation points, that's IMO a plus.

    I'd like to ask for some help concerning writing, I've read a few of your posts on the subject and I was very positively impressed with your feedback so I figured out you may be to go-to person to talk about this. I'm so far 36k words into my novel, but I feel that sometimes, in some scenes, I could maybe use more detail, but I end up not doing it, perhaps because I want to get it done quickly. I mean, the story wants to get out of my head, but I'm frustrated that I don't do it quickly enough. Also, I admit I sometimes feel intimidated by the simple act of writing, as in being insecure about my skills, which means I delay opening my Word files for as long as possible and only write when I get distracted with something which makes me want to write. I'm trying to overcome this insecurity but I admit it's hard, even though people like what I write... So, could you offer me some insight on it?

    Feel free to answer by posting on my profile, PM, or whichever way you feel more comfortable.

    Best regards, and thanks in advance,

    Cerberus
    Ki the thing I'm working on refuses to cooperate. >:( You should wake up and fix it.

    please :3 See I even asked nicely!
    I don't mind the critique! Thank you for taking the time to write it! I don't think I'll be able to give you anything half as good, though.

    I'll go read the rest now. :x
    Fellow ASB referee applicant!

    (novice, and I applied as well, to clarify)

    Good luck passing to you and me~!
    Ki! You're falling off my profile. :c

    (Clover Cirrus no go away. You're ruining my perfect streak. >:( )
    kiru look i can send you messages from my ds kiru or at least try to kiru kiru look.
    Oh no who is this Eifie person why is she taking over your page she must be stopped!! >:(
    VMs don't even let me use different fonts. :(

    Ki did you know that all the VMs that show up on the first page of your profile are from me.
    Ki, yay, good morning! No! I'm zzz. The sleepy kitty looks really bad in the forum font. vo.ov
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