Oh fudge people have actually been looking at this stuff - *hides*
Well, if you didn't want us to look why'd you ask us to look at it? :3
I like a lot of your work. :D But there are a few things that sorta bothered me..
Um.. your Phoenix.. its wings are sorta.. bent. I don't think wing bones bend like that. And the feathers.. I like your feathers, but the way you layered it upon layer upon layer upon layer at the bottom made it sorta seem like its a very thick wing with inches of feathers stacked upon each other. [I didn't say that well. D:]
Luxray. Aside from it being a little light [don't worry, I don't blame you] and the thick legs and whatnot I think the eye's a little too high up on its head. And the fur on its head makes it look like a Super-sayan xP
Flygon x Azumarill- It's really cute! But the flygon's wings are too small to carry it, and looking at the azumarill, it looks like it's going to rock over onto its back if it's not careful.
Charmander- forehead's too big, that's all I have to say. [aaah, brain tumor!] oh, and you fergot to colour the belly tan [or whatever colour it is]. And the tail's quite.. blunt at the end.
Houndoom- what Miss Arylett said.
Weedle- Your weedle's head is smaller than most weedle I've seen. But it's so CUUUUTE~ Maybe you shouldn't have outlined the caterpie's mouth, it looks kinda funny.
Scyther Swipe- I like the position and the way you drew him. But the mouth sorta.. well, looks like it shouldn't be in that place. And the scyther's foot.. it looks like a boot xD
Everything is awesome even if I said they have little funny tidbits to them. I have to say, my favorite is your ampharos ^^ kawaii desu!!~
My crit sucks, so you don't have to listen x3