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[RESULTS IN] Pokemon Creepypasta Contest

Re: Pokemon Creepypasta Contest

Brock, make up your own idea. I'm fine with you using a video for a refference, just Don't copy/paste or make small minor detail changes to a story and call it your own.
 
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Glitch City


So, about a month ago, I bought my first game: Pokémon Yellow Version. I got pretty far in the game with my glitched Mew. I finally reached the Safari Zone. I went in, and then turned around to see if the Attendant could help me to find some pokémon. She asked me if I wanted to leave and I told her no. I decided to just go back in and figure it out by myself. When I entered again, I was surrounded by Nidoking. I was scared, so I saved my game and reset it. When I turned it back on, I was in the Safari Zone, determined to get out. I turned, only to see “They’re fighting back…” written in blood in the grass. I went to the Attendant again, thinking she would ask me if I wanted to leave again. When I talked to her, though, she asked if I wanted to join a Safari Game. Before I had a chance to decide what she was talking about, the cursor stopped over ‘no’. The A button went in by itself. I was sent back in to the Safari Zone, scared out of my mind. Suddenly, the group of Nidoking reappeared, inching closer every moment. Remembering I had my Flying Mew, I sent it out and flew to a random Route. I decided to walk around, find some more glitches I could use. After walking for a while, an unknown PA system announced that my time was up. I was teleported to the Gatehouse in front of the Safari Zone. I decided that this was just another glitch and went outside. I was surprised and definitely scared when I saw the route I had been on moments before. Only, this time, it was lacking color. I figured that maybe I had found a glitch hotspot. I went over to the nearest patch of grass and the battle credit came up. I almost dropped my Game Boy when the speech box showed ‘Fifty-one Nidoking appeared!”. I wasn’t too afraid, remembering that I had my hacked Mew with me. Amazingly, though, the pokémon that my trainer threw out wasn’t my hacked Mew: it was my level five Pikachu that I never even attempted to train. My feeble attempt to tackle the first Nidoking proved ineffective. The Nidoking then Transformed, a move I never knew it had. Because it didn’t have that move; my hacked Mew did. I watched in horror as my beloved Mew destroyed the Pikachu I had never even cared for. But it didn’t stop there. After my Pikachu fainted, the Mew attacked my character, and I (the actual me) felt every blow. The mew finished me off with a Thunderbolt, and my dead body fell off of the couch and onto that cold, hard floor. That’s right: I’m dead. You probably figured that it couldn’t have been that bad, because the narrator’s alive, right? Wrong. I’m a ghost with a message: Whatever you do, do not enter Glitch City.
 
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wtf...

I saw the video for that and wrote down what the guy was saying as he... fuck. He probably read one and made a video of it... an I wrote down his words.
 
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Hey I wrote that, using a Youtube viedo I saw for a plot guidline. Or does that not count either?

Brock are you saying YOU are the author of Glitchy Red, the one with the rebelling character? You entry needs to be and idea completely imagined and written by you not merely shared or a modified version of someone else's work!

I am working on something I would hope to finish in time to enter but classes are now bogging me down. I would love to try this contest though despite that I never win anything.

I know you said there was no prize, but if you would like I can make a banner for the winner(unless by some miracle I did actually win making my own prize would not make much sense)?
 
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Not a problem, I have not done much with pokemon graphics but I will do my best.
 
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Brock are you saying YOU are the author of Glitchy Red, the one with the rebelling character? You entry needs to be and idea completely imagined and written by you not merely shared or a modified version of someone else's work!

What? We're not even talking about Glitchy Red here...

Working on one a little similar to the Beuatifly one I posted, but different.
 
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Ok, I am going to take some control in this, RTB hope you don't mind... though it was my idea originally.


I think

Two first place one for best art another for best story

I believe the banner for best art should include said art... just a theory.

And there could be a ribbon for all those who participated as a consolation prize.


Brock: Glitchy Red isn't your's, neither is Pokewalker; by the way both are in the first post in Creepy Pokemon Shit.

Also Brock and everyone else:

Rules: anyone can enter. If you've posted a story or picture in the "Creepy Pokemon Shit" thread, you CANNOT use it here. Also, you CANNOT use a story or picture you just copypasted off the internet, it has to be one that you actually wrote or drew. In the event of a tie, a second voting will occur, and the winner of that vote is the ..... well, winner.

Add it must be unique and not borrowing plot basis or ideas from other "creepypasta". This is a form of artwork and if you refer to Rule # 11 this is bad and against the rules to use someone else's work or ideas.
 
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Game Love

Pokemon Platinum - a preowned game that I own. I've beaten it. All 8 Sinnoh badges - mine. Giratina - mine. Dialga, Palkia - mine. I've done a whole lot, and I'm absolutely in love with Platinum.

...Of course, comes the day I want to start anew. To reset. With the good Pokemon resting in another game - but some of mine can't go. I can't put Giratina in Soul Silver - can I? I don't want its horrid Altered Forme. Oh, no way! It doesn't matter - I can always raise another Giratina on my new game. It's not a problem.

...If only I'd done it. Traded Giratina to Soul Silver. I kind of regret it now...

So I start up my DSi and load the new game. I begin to reset for a female Piplup - seeing as I make a better choice of names for females - but the "L" button is failing. That's odd. It's usually not like this. Mine sometimes has a quirk or two, but nothing that makes it fail. So I resort to constantly turning the power on and off for a female Piplup. After what is like 100 tries, I give up. No female for me. Odd since shouldn't I have gotten one by now? Only a 10% chance, but it shouldn't take so many tries.

This bugs me, and my broken L button. What's more, the L button works on any other Pokemon game, and any other DS game.

Never in my journey do I encounter any female Pokemon. Trainers and Gym Leaders all use male Pokemon. Even female-only Pokemon turn male. When I obtain a Latias from my friend, after he leaves I notice it's MALE. Why?

Why is my game against male Pokemon?

This phenomena bugs me to no end, until finally I snap. I'm gender picky, and being restricted to a single gender is enough to drive me off the deep end. I bang up the DS. Then I carefully reset my game.

Then comes the cries of a hundred Pokemon - they all play at once, frightening me. Every time I choose Platinum, creepy, slowed versions of Pokemon cries play out. Even though I continuously keep the volume at mute, the cries go on. Soon my game turns black and white, with spots of red. My trainer in the card is turning sad and weeping blood. Like Lost Silver.

My friend is worried about my game - he wants his traded Pokemon back, but is afraid that his will get glitched if we communicate. So the two of us have a harder time without some of our neat Pokemon.

Eventually, in Creepy Platinum, I find Giratina. The Pokemon cries stop and an Unown cry plays out, very slowly. Very, very, very, slooooooooooooooooooooowly.

Then scenes of creepy and freaky events play through, instead of a Pokemon battle. These scenes look like photos - all of scary events. People being killed. Bloody corpses, organs ripped out and that sort of stuff. People killing themselves. Murder. Then the most cruel part of all: SPIDERS. Horrid eyes and horrid bodies. They poison people. Kill them. Envelope them with webs. Keep them as prized possessions. Parts of "the collection". Or the worser fate: kill them.

Then the shadow of Giratina comes on, looking realistic. Its red eyes appear, then it roars - then, a message comes up saying,

"Fate of choice your is what?"

Its a weird message - then I realize you're supposed to read it backwards. But why backwards?

"What is your choice of fate?" The only options are "Yes" and "No". I pick "no" and hope to end all of this. Icky, horrid madness.

"..."
"Redder than the Days of Dawn, blacker than the loss of the great sieges of light that engulf us."
"A bitter and bickering sense of greatness of fate lies unconsumed up above and down below."
"The two entwined destines of great and mighty power have no banishing effect on the bitter greatness below our crumbling bodies."
"A single deity created our shallow universe, but in return was consumed by this sense in which created the shadows and sorrow we bathe in."
"When one loses sight of bitter sweet love, strong love of a single entity, forces channel to reconnect the sights. However, they fail to realize the revenge the lost one seeks."

I am puzzled by these strange messages... this... code. Then I realize that it means that the game is angry with me for resetting it, after everything we'd been through... done...

I finally realize that this is no lovefest. This is a game. Just a game. Why am I being emotional? But I have to stop this. The power fails to turn off. The game will not come out of the back.

The game is angry. Giratina roars and roars and Unown cluster the screens. The terrifying death scenes appear, but in a great screamfest. My DS ejects blood out of the volume sockets. I scream, but it's not audible - the DS grows fangs and teeth. The DS advances toward me. Then a battle appears on screen. Pikachu, Level 5, VS Arceus, Level 100, Platinum colored. Me VS Platinum.

"PIKACHU used Volt Tackle!"
"PIKACHU's attack missed!"
"ARCEUS used Judgment!"
My side hurts and I scream.
"PIKACHU used Protect!"
"But it failed!"
Strange...
"ARCEUS used Punishment!"
Bloody wounds are scratched through my entire body. I scream again, louder.
"PIKACHU used Recover!"
I feel a little of the pain subside. I check Pikachu's HP bar. It's in the low yellow...
"ARCEUS used Hyper Voice!"
The DS practically screams at me, bursting into flames and electrocuting me. It falls onto me, and I am too paralyzed to move it, to get away from it, shout for help, or attempt to stop the flames destroying my body. Destroying the DS itself. Erasing anything that could've helped solve the mystery.

I'm dead. Yes, I am. You're talking to a ghost.

Never, ever, ever fall in love with a Pokemon game. Hate it with all your life. Make the game your slave.

Do you want to live? Then torture your game. Love is not what drives Pokemon. Torture. Death. Beat up your game when it does something wrong. Rip it up if you fail at something.

In Pokemon, love is not the word.
 
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Ok, I am going to take some control in this, RTB hope you don't mind... though it was my idea originally.


I think

Two first place one for best art another for best story

I believe the banner for best art should include said art... just a theory.

And there could be a ribbon for all those who participated as a consolation prize.


Brock: Glitchy Red isn't your's, neither is Pokewalker; by the way both are in the first post in Creepy Pokemon Shit.

Add it must be unique and not borrowing plot basis or ideas from other "creepypasta". This is a form of artwork and if you refer to Rule # 11 this is bad and against the rules to use someone else's work or ideas.

It's fine, it was your idea, anyway. I had originally planned to have to first place winners, one in each category. Will add to the rules. and the ribbon thing would work.

I could make ribbons for the winner(s).

Sure! Blastoise, if you could make two ribbons, one for art and one for stories, then all the non-winning participants could take one for participating.

Also, C2K, I think that if I get enough entries, I may do first, second and third place winners for each category. (like/dislike?)
 
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Add it must be unique and not borrowing plot basis or ideas from other "creepypasta". This is a form of artwork and if you refer to Rule # 11 this is bad and against the rules to use someone else's work or ideas.

What? I had a lot of it written up. The Beautifly gave me the idea, but now I can't even use it because I got one idea from it?

fricking god...
 
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How are you 19 and don't know how to avoid plagiarism what

also. Since you said I could.
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It's more that you learn things than teach things to someone new to the world, and after the whole clefairy integration affair, there was so much to learn.

Just after, there wasn't much to do but curl up in front of the television, trying to tuck yourself into the seams of the couch like people do in emergencies, and watch the news for days. It wasn't really that it told us much -- the clefable worked well, worked quick, dug into society like maggots into dying flesh, so the men on tv looked dull and uncomfortable, wearing faces like there were weights dangled over their heads. But watching the news was something small towns like ours could do. We felt safe with the flash of the screen in our faces, even if all it told us was that it was safe to let these pokemon into our homes. Not too many people did, not when the anchormen swallowed the word safe like something sick and oily, but it told us that the occasional bustle and hum that came from out our windows were clefairy and the like hunting lazily for shelter. Once, even though my sister grabbed for the hem of my shirt when I stood, I pressed the curtain our mother had fashioned out of one of her old nightgowns to the pane of the window and stared through. For all the shivering in groups we did the front garden was simply the garden; the grass was folded in places, and there were caking impressions of feet in the dirt around the bushes, but no one was looming under the trees. All I could report to my sister (who had easily forgotten her fear) was that the flowers were missing from their stems, and that was not something to worry about.

All the same, and maybe because of the clefable grip on the news, the parents of the street cooled down and we kids started to populate the yards and sidewalks again with nothing more than a warning from our mothers to keep out of the streets (and always they said it as if this rule was something fresh from the parenting manual). Just as soon, the flowers grew back, and the only hint we had that any of the clefairy's presence was that though there were more unoccupied houses on the street since the pokemon started showing up, few had the accumulated dust undisturbed by tiny footprints. Yet for everything that suggested that our strictly normal suburban life was pulling at its seams, the curtains and doorknobs that guarded the clefairy houses never twitched, not even when a boy called Rob Nicholas flung pebbles at the windows of one until his mother dragged him home by his ear.

Naturally we were forbidden to speculate, because it was a time where mothers were allowed to feed on their own fear and pull their breath in nervously by every corner; looking for too long at those houses was reason enough to be brought inside on beautiful summer days. My sister was at an age where it was tradition to press one's luck, and so she and her neighborhood friends gathered in tight bundles just outside the property lines and chattered in a loud hush. They moved and rustled inside themselves and to me they seemed tied to each other, a bundle of wheat rotten with gossip. On the other hand, I was too young for so many hangers-on, and the clefairy houses stretched just as tall and white as the others, and the comfort and colors of the front garden were much more attractive. Playing under the rosebushes where from my angle the sun scattered over leaves like water in a fountain brought me to lunch smelling like flowers and feeling clear from the clip of the wind. There were no friends -- not the way my sister saw it, but she never saw past the shine of plastic faces -- yet I was content, and my mother never scolded me for wandering places I shouldn't. Rob Nicholas' mother once told mine how she was lucky that I kept away from all that clefairy nonsense.

I don't know how my mother never found out that I didn't always play alone, considering how she smiled around the line of the bushes when she called me in for dinner. Or maybe I don't know how my playmate dissolved back into the flowers whenever my mother looked -- the petals were left shimmering and shivering like a colony of ants were pushing at their stems, but I could never see the path she took.

My clefairy was young, I think; she didn't understand the concept of age the way that I did, who even as a child knew that age wound long ahead of me. From the way she blinked at the sunlight, though, and took steps carefully as though she wasn't sure if the ground would stay put, it was clear how fresh she was to the world -- or my world, at least. That was how she came out of the neighbor's garden to peer at me where I huddled in the front yard: her feet so small they skirted around individual blades of grass, eyes wet and blinking in the morning sun, arms held as if to keep her balanced. She was that faded pink they used to use to paint clefairy in children's books, glinting with white sunlight that snagged on the tips of fur blurring her edges. At first I thought, or I hoped, that she wasn't real, because there was a certain glow around her that made me remember dreams, and it had been long since the last time I had met a clefairy, but then she came nearer and crisper and there was no more time to dream. I froze then, and she teetered on the edge of my shadow, and I very nearly struck her and ran.

There was a moment that passed where I trembled and the clefairy only looked at me. Then she said, "Your flowers are very handsome," and her voice felt like cool water passing into me, like each word was as important as the last, and there was nothing to do but relax.

She found me in the garden often after that, though she seemed to prefer just sitting near me while I allowed some toy or another a stroll in the grass. I came to understand her as a friend. She remained a constant, despite the risks of being present in the public, settling on the ground and looking into the flowers almost daily, until it started to worry me when she didn't show. I liked her, really -- she wasn't so chattery as the girls my sister seemed attached to, but neither was she as crass as the boys; she spoke infrequently, and when she did it was always deliberate to the point that I wondered if she tasted the words and was savoring them like fine cuisine. Listening to her was like relearning my own language. She told me once that it had taken her ages to learn English, but later said it was months (though I'm uncertain if she meant the same thing by both). Either way, it was as if certain conventions were lost on her; she formed words in her mouth that had entirely the wrong meaning for the situation at hand, but said them so earnestly that they regained correctness. Every day she learned a new word, so she said, and she used it how it felt like it should be used. She told me that the light rain we got one day was stepping along her shoulders, then pulled back under a nearby tree to shake herself dry. She told me later that the damp patches on my clothing were fists grabbing at my shirt and shorts. I gave up trying to correct her; she was trying so hard, and hearing her was musical and new. She was enchanting; the form of her stuck in the corner of my eye, the place where the visible turns to ghosts.

In time my clefairy became my normal; she became outdoor hours, the way she was always stepping through them and spinning her spidersilk into words. Time began passing, very nearly leaving me behind, and very certainly leaving her. I turned ten somehow, and old enough to care for myself, even if my birthday had approached almost unnoticed. My mother, like many in my neighborhood, did not subscribe to the idea of letting me leave home at so young an age, but did allow me certain freedoms: curfews were hazy, if present at all, and I was given the privilege of deciding for myself what were safe actions. When I told my clefairy this her eyes came over with a glittering film and she pleaded that I might help her chase the moon. I felt that seeing nighttime had been thrust on me without my say; somewhere in the back of my heart and lungs was an ache of childhood. But my clefairy turned her eyes on me and I could never say no, could never move my lips except to smile to see her dance with sunset.

She tugged me by the hand towards the horizon in hopes to meet the moon before it rose. Watching her walk laced my mouth with the taste of pastel candyfloss and morning mist, because I think it mimicked the way she floated just around the grass and twisted in the low air. She was morning-like, or at least the feeling of waking up after a long, moonlight-bathed sleep, the certain freshness that came with cool autumn evenings and full days. Sometimes when she blinked heavy at the flowers or the touch of my fingers on toys, it looked like the wet sheen that glinted black as pillbugs was slumber slipping out of her. When she brought me to the end of my street, though, little hand pawing soft at my fingers, she was brighter than the streetlights and buzzing quicker than the moths that flocked to them.

She pulled me to a place at the corner where the grass was damp with shadow and sat on the edge of the curb to stare at the darkening sky. I stood behind her -- pushing up against the rough trunk of a tree so as to drench myself with the shade. It was still dangerous then to be seen near clefairy.

We sat for at least two hours while the day rusted and disintegrated into night. I could count the minutes by the way sounds dropped away -- eight o'clock and the children stopped laughing, half past and the dull throb of parental chatter, nine and the clicks of light switches. Then it was just full breath because my clefairy was looking to the stars so eagerly they might have honored her with an ancient dance, twinkling in time and sweeping through the heavens. The moon stayed solid as ever, searching the sky for its missing half, but it might have shined a different white for her. I looked at my clefairy, not the moon, because the light strung across her fur like she'd stepped through spiderweb, draped over her like tinsel. Occasionally some teenage couple passed, or a man jogging in the cool of the night. My clefairy raised her arm to gesture to them.

"The moon follows humans," she said. "Look how they steal its light."

She said, "He's glowing, he's borrowed the stars."

She said, "Why is she wearing comets' tails in her hair?"

To her, the passersby were the most interesting of films. She told me casually that her kind too was lent the shine of the moon, and they carried it in their wings and their eyes and their hearts. Watching it slide off the skins of things was a science to her, or a religion; she commented on how suede-covered creatures sneaked behind the dim curtains the moon let down, and how frogs and snakes wore gleaming plastic. Mostly, though, she revered the spray of white on human shoulders, the spread of it down man's back -- or maybe not man, but the men and the women she saw in the neighborhood, because she knew them by sight and by the pattern of their bodies. She referenced the mother of a girl who lived across the street, and who was beautiful in a worn and maternal way. My clefairy talked about the way her skin embraced her bones, and how once the lady had stepped out to her patio in just her underwear to smoke quietly into the evening. The light that cast down her body skipped across her ribs like a stone across water. There was the lonely man who had extra folds of flesh and sat on his front steps and read, and who glinted with sweat even at night. There were the little boys and girls who still looked brand new and smiled and stretched. My clefairy knew them all, though her names for them were nothing more than the unorthodox junctions of words she had for each. When one passed, she cooed in awe.

She said, "If I could just ..."

These ventures into the dark were a one-sided dream. I didn't speak, and I didn't step out to her, because I was fearful. I once tried to ask her if she knew anything about her kind -- if they were planning anything, if they were really what the rumors said. She was too vague to understand, and I remained uncertain as to whether she was even included.

She asked me every night to join her at the curb, speaking in this hushed and twinkling sound. Eventually there was a point where I wanted to live in sunrays and not cold darkness, but I couldn't tell her no. I stopped making morning visits to summer air instead. School started. I met other children. My clefairy vanished from the day and I didn't mind too terribly. But in the same way the roof of the school building cut the light with windows and doors, and everything was saturated yellow because the walls were just off-white. I remembered that I didn't look forward to school. Schoolwork tore dissent from my throat like a fish hook.

There was a day where Rob Nicholas' mother came to school hysterical because she wanted to know where her son was and would we please tell her because he hadn't been home since Tuesday. The quiet that bubbled under her sobs reminded us all how it was Friday. I wanted to open my mouth and tell her it would be ok, but all I could find on my tongue was that he had freckles that dotted his own expanse of stars across his cheeks.

People started to whisper and we started, again, to count the empty houses that caged the streets. People gathered at doors. I walked home from school one day and there was someone knocking hard at the door of the lonely man, fist pounding a hard tattoo and voice wavering between the beats. The little girl across the street stopped coming to school because her mother had vanished and her father had dropped all their belongings into his truck to drive them away from our town. I heard some of the younger kids, the ones that had their bodies still thin and rubbery, theorizing that everyone was going somewhere without them, some sort of hidden park or magic other dimension. Sometimes I was tempted to try to believe them. Sometimes I just watched them and the footprints of the sun on their smiles.

I don't know why my mother never moved us. I heard my sister begging her behind doors to get us out of our neighborhood but my mother was more solid than the gloomy presence of the white houses flanking ours. Or maybe I don't know why I never felt that same carnal urge to leave, even when the people I knew dwindled down to nothing.

My mother was making dinner, standing over the kitchen counters and letting the conflicting lights of nighttime and the stove's flame slide over her face. There was that thick sort of quiet, the kind that was louder than crowds and that hurt more than blades, the kind that pulled taught and impenetrable over mouths. My sister was looking into the table. She hadn't been eating since the argument she'd had with my mother. My skin was beginning to dry and tear in the desert of quiet. I needed to: I stood, and asked my mother if I could go out.

My sister looked up so sharply it stung but my mother made a noncommittal sound that I took for a yes, so I left. The night air felt more like home.

The space between my house and the curb had disappeared and I was there, sitting in the light of a full moon. Breezes caught at the edges of me. There wasn't anything to listen for anymore, really; children didn't laugh in my neighborhood, lights weren't turned on. Parents, what parents were left whispered in an endless hum that carried the silence along. I focused on my own breathing, trying to hear the pulse of it in my lungs and the scrape of air along my throat.

A soft "oh."

My clefairy sat next to me, fur brushing against my side just so, especially when she breathed in deep like she did on these great moonlight nights. She looked at the rough parts of my knees for where the light dipped into the folds of skin. There was a quiet.

She asked me if I would like to see something beautiful, but she said something like breathing and undying and perfect. The words and her pronunciation of them stuck in my ears and eyes like a winter wind, but all the same I stood for her and she nearly floated to her feet. When she walked she was on the wind, that carried away the sounds of her footsteps and the smells of the flowers that struggled in the oncoming fall. She was walking away from the moon, a silk white cape flowing across her back. My body ached with the business of the gossip that wandered over my head, but I kept with her fluttering pace. She didn't look back.

She found a house, one of those original ones that came up empty and echoing with the low call of her kind. It was far down the street from mine, winding past gentle curves in the road and seeming small from my front garden. She pulled up on the toes of her flower-sized feet to reach the doorknob but the door swung open at a touch, into a dark hollow. The light of the moon missed the dusty entrance hall, but the switches were so heavy with dirt that they would have fallen down to off on their own; besides, an organic glow seeped from her wings and it gave the faint illumination of a nightlight. I barely caught the gesture she made to me, waving me into the room past the stairs. The door there hung just open, like someone meant it to be tantalizing. She passed the door somehow without jarring it at all; it creaked appropriately when I pushed my palm against it.

The windows in the room flushed the walls with a familiar plenilunar white. Everything was wet with light, so much so that it was almost unreal; the walls looked joined in all the wrong places and filled thick from exposure. I stood awkwardly in the doorway, trying not to focus on how the door didn't quite fit. My clefairy sighed in a way that was more a song. She looked to me and the piece of night in her eyes pulled me into the room. My bare knees were washed pale in the moon. She played her fingers in the air, letting the light twine round them.

"We collect moonlight," she said. "We soak in it."

I told her I already knew. A wall twitched, just a little.

She shook her head, tilted it, and the side of her face dripped clean of glow. "We," she said, and she looked into me. "But you, you gather it in every pore. Were you shaped for this?"

She made a weightless gesture to the wall behind her and I saw the space on it where Rob Nicholas' eyes should have gone and where the freckles sat on his cheeks. He was spread out flat across the wall and pushed tight next to the beautiful mother from across the street; her hips fit into the grotesque expanse of the fat man. They were preserved from the front, their faces staring empty and sagging from the wall, and I could find the inexpert cuts down their arms and their backs that were stitched into the next man. They were colored pale with my clefairy's moonlight. Something hot and acidic rose in my throat when I turned to follow the line of faces I could recognize.

My clefairy told to me that she needed the light we took from the sky, that her kind needed it. Their wings were so small, she said, and we humans were so potentially elegant if we dressed in starlight. She told me it was a duty to clefairy and to the clefable that were strung across the land. A woman from town stuck tight to the wall, yellow fat oozing at the edges, breasts hanging empty in front of her. My clefairy touched a scar on a man who worked at the library. She said that we borrowed moonlight and she needed to borrow us, just for a moment.

She looked at me and the light flush down my shins. She moved close to me, comforting, saying she'd put everything right again, touching my leg with both tiny hands and I'd never quite noticed the silver gleam of her claws. She said she needed this to make things better for everyone and she'd teach me how to use this light just like her, one day.

She stood behind me and touched the curve of my back a hard claw dug in and I felt it click against my spine and pull smooth down the whole of me. My breath caught hard on the top of my throat like vomit and she said, "I need for you to keep still."
 
Re: Pokemon Creepypasta Contest

wtf...

I saw the video for that and wrote down what the guy was saying as he... fuck. He probably read one and made a video of it... an I wrote down his words.
...Writing down the words of a video somebody else made is not writing. It's typing.

Unless you made up the story and tell it in your own words, it is not yours and you can not enter it in a contest. This is a creative works contest, not a contest of who can transcribe words from a YouTube video (tip: absolutely anyone can, and this is not relevant to their talent at anything). This should not be this hard to grasp.

It is also absolutely not the same as "getting one idea from" something else.
 
Re: Pokemon Creepypasta Contest

What I meant was I am now writing a creepypasta based around Pokémon draining humans of their blood, which I got from the Beautifly story.

But Chary2K says I can't dp that since I'm stealing it so yeah... Never mind my Entry.

Unless I get off my ass to art simething.
 
Re: Pokemon Creepypasta Contest

(Verne, don't know what you wanted as a title, so I'll just call your story "Moonlight". Unless you want something different, in which case tell me so.)
 
Re: Pokemon Creepypasta Contest

Meh, I never title shit cause I suck. I was calling it moon garden myself.
 
Re: Pokemon Creepypasta Contest

I'll change that right away. Thanks for submitting something!

(I promise I'll put something in before the contest is over.)
 
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