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ArtificialFlavour: It was actually a fire retype ^^;


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A Marhtomp pixel-over so far :D

Crit?
 
Hikari Nijino said:
Here are some splices I made:

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1. Looks good, but simple. Perhaps you could have added Pikachu's cheek pouches? Also the right ear(our right) looks a bit too high on the head, compared to the other ear.
2. Good! I can't really find much wrong with it. The tail doesn't look attached though, try and adjust that.
3. The wings are coming out of its rear end, and the head flame(is that what it is?) looks awkward and unnecessary. Not a very well done sprite.
 
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Turtwig/Shinx, dubbed "Ancia" as a combination of the names of my mom's Turtwig and Shinx. :D
 
I like the Fire-type Lapras, but the fire on its head could be a bit redder at the base. I can barely tell it starts there.
 
A Chocolate Pokemon: (something I invented. Get them at the Ultimate Pikachu's Sprite Shop.)
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The chest plate blends with the body too much. You need to use some darker shades of chocolate on various places, like the afore mentioned chest plate, to make it look better. Unless it is supposed to look like a chocolate bar...then its perfect.

AHEM. The Mantine in my sig. I'll edit this and post it here if I really have to, but for now you can just look down an inch.
 
Well, it's just a recolour. The only thing that is mildly chocolate-y is the colour. And you didn't invent brown recolours. :/
 
superyoshi888 said:
The chest plate blends with the body too much. You need to use some darker shades of chocolate on various places, like the afore mentioned chest plate, to make it look better. Unless it is supposed to look like a chocolate bar...then its perfect
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Thats how its supposed to look like.
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Well, it's just a recolour. The only thing that is mildly chocolate-y is the color[/qoute]

oh well
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... I was kinda hoping for some constructive criticism, like how I could improve on them, or what I've done wrong and how to fix it.
 
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