mewtini

Oh, would you mnd if I rewrote this, editing some things in between? Also, eliminated these following words fromy our vocabulary: very, pretty (when describing quantity), also, first, second, third (You get it), etc. But yeah, would you mind if I edited?

You never gave me a file or such? The image is illegible.

Nope.

You really think? Heh, I'm flattered with your assessment. I don't think I'm as interesting as Butterfree though.

So, basically I'd like to just read your Part 1 of the walkthrough

Sorry, and sure, I guess. It's just a bit complicated for me that's all!

I meant like I'll show you mean through words, since I can't actually make it.

Eheh, sorry I thought I did. ANyways, I'll show you what it means later. The walkthrough should be more like a guide. And I know TCoD has tons, but it's honestly just best to stick with 2-3 as stated before. But again, I am just an advisor. You do not have to do what I say!

Yeah. Alright, here's my criticism.

1. You need to be a lot more formal. Being friendly on your site seems a bit unprofessional to me. (Though be as friendly as you want on any chat/forum you may start!) Also, separate writings into paragraphs!

2. Always, and I mean always, indent. Trust me. I don't know why, but it looks better that way xD

3. I'll need to edit some of the designs of the pages for you verbally. Honestly, I will find it to be much more organized and more comprehendable.

4. I'd limit yourself to a 2-3 affiliate icons. It just seems like a bit too much to have 5 or 6.

Hope my critique is actually constructive. ~~ (Also, sorry for say "I" and "me" so much, though I believe I speak for others as well...)

I'll go check then

I'll check for gramatical errors, typos, etc. In the meantime I'll try to think

I guess :P

I will... but I feel like I'm doing nothing

Alrgiht. Sorry for posting so late...

She's just not that talkative. Just one of those people who gets straight doen to business.

I wouldn't know.

good night!

You're goofy XD

*Pats back* Im sorry

Yeah that would be awesome, better if he didnt leave