Calling all spriters!

[White Wolf]

About Palmee, in my defence I was just working off of FMC's artwork but thanks for the advice, I'll change some things such as your suggestions and Kai's and I'll see what I come up with :) Also Kai, about the colours, I wanted them to be different to Tropius cause of what Grimdour said but thanks, I'll be changing the colours as well. Better get to work on it :)

 

[Coloursfall]

*pops in* About Palmlee, I'll admit that that the picture I showed is very horrid, and the yellow on the neck were supposed to be buds (like, for flowers?)

I can try to tweak it a bit more though.

 

[ferrikpm]

sorry i took so long. i kept forgetting to work on them.(i remember threads by forum, and my sprite thread is dead, so i forgot to check in.)
bu here they are!

by the way, is there going to be music in this game? i could help with that very well.

 

[Mad MOAI]

Since I've been lazy with scratching for the past month, I've made a cute unnamed Normal-type. It fits in both FR/LG and DP, too :3

Data and back sprite coming later.

 

[Dragon]

It's kinda hard to see... >_< Maybe make the outline a bit darker.

 

[Mad MOAI]

It's fine on my screen, though. Hm...... Maybe I just have exceptionally good eyesight?

 

[Dragon]

Or maybe I should look at it in Dewgong style. No, my eyes will burn out from being in Roar of Time... Bleh.

Okay, other than that the black lines look like you just put them in random places. Either get rid of them on the tail, or make it a black line. Woo? =D

 

[Mad MOAI]

Good critique, but I don't exactly get what you're saying...

 

[Dragon]

I mean, the black dots on the tail look out of place, maybe connect them.

 

[Mad MOAI]

Ah, thanks. All get that done after school (since I only have twelve minutes). Watch for the updated version.

EDIT: Never mind I did it now :)

 

[Darksong]

New scratch!

Sevant [sever + ant]suggestions for new name welcome
Bug-type

Back sprite coming soon.

Soldier Ant Pokemon
Height: 10 inches
Weight: 3 pounds

Ability: Swarm

Pokedex entry:

Its legs have sharp spines on the back that can cut through wood. It makes its nest in the trees it cuts open.

Moves:

Level 1- Leech Life
Level 1- Leer
Level 8- Fury Cutter

Evolution (the below is an image):

 

[Dragon]

"Femono" for the queen ant? Sevant sounds ridiculously close to Servant, if you ask me. But maybe you were going for that.

Well.. the eye is square. And maybe you could name it... no, never mind. =P

 

[Darksong]

...You're right, but that kind of fits, since it starts as a worker ant and all...

How is this? I only had to fix two pixels :D

I'm still working on the other sprites....

 

[Tropiking]

The third section looks a little flat and did you use a a dark red on the outline? It looks like it's an all black outline.

I know it's been awhile since I've last posted but I've been kind of busy lately.

I haven't been totally lazy though. Tell which one of these you think is the better sprite and/or which looks more like a Marowak evo. They're basicly the same, just a few alterations.

and

Also, tell me what you think of my Blastoise scratch.

 

[Blastoise Fortooate]

^Nice, and not just because I like Blastoise.

I have an idea for a fake, I'll post the sprite when I finish, but here's a pic.

An electric eel, color is up for debate, I reserve the rights to use it in a fake region or something if I si choose, etc.

 

[Dragon]

Marowak evo: First one, second is fat/Machoke-ish.

Blastoise: Its chest is kinda.. big? FAT

Blastoise's scratch: All black outline, but you said it wasn't the actual, so. Well, maybe you could add something to the eye to make it look less dead. Unless its' see-through.

=P

 

[Callisto]

Your Bedroom


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Why is there no bed in the bedroom?