blazheirio889
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Re: Pokémon Registration Office
Sounds good to me. Approved.
You still haven't specified exactly how the opponent can move or attack while affected by Sticky Harden. I assume they can't really move at all, as you changed the effects to three actions - however in the description, you still said three rounds. Also, the chances of his ability activating don't line up with the duration anymore. Since the chances are so dramatically lowered, though, a change to 20%, 25%, and then 30% sounds good to me.
... you mean signature attribute here, right?
Twitch (Female Skarmory) <Keen Eye>
Signature Move: Smashing Hallway Traps of Doom
Using the moves she already knows, Twitch has come up with a way to create the ultimate battle hazard. She's taken moves such as spikes and stealth rock, adding in some of her own metal, and formed a move that is much larger and more hazardous.
She uses all these moves and creates a larger, spiky, thorny, destructive wall between her and her opponent. The wall isn't so much solid as it is made out of spikes and metal and things that will cause damage to whoever tries to break through it. There are holes in the wall, but there are also metal spikes sticking through that will cut you if you try to go through those holes. In effect, this is a block between her and whoever she wants to stop from getting to her. The wall is as tall as Twitch is - roughly 5'6 - and it curves in a U shape around her, but does not fully surround her.
The wall can usually be broken down after what amounts to 15% damage. It acts as a steel-type, meaning it is weak to fire attacks, resists dark, etc.
Steel / Other / 7% / One action to use, lasts until the wall is broken down
Effects: Creates a spiky doomy wall between her and whoever she sets it up between. The wall causes damage to whoever tries to pass through (decided on by the ref; the wall is made up of sharp objects and however much damage is done should be decided by what the pokemon attempting to pass through does to itself, and obviously types are taken into account).
Usage Gap: Every 5 rounds since the last wall breaks down.
Sounds good to me. Approved.
[Bruno](M)
Ability: Stench
Signature Move: Sticky Harden
Bruno is very affectionate. He likes pokemon a lot. Sometimes, he just wishes he could keep them forever. And he might have found a way to do that!
He slides over to his intended target and covers them up in... himself. Then he hardens real hard, using Sticky Harden, and he seems to solidify so much that whatever he's covered can't possibly get out without him letting them. In fact, the only way he'll let them is if he's ordered too, because he just loves his pokemon so much! However, he can only keep himself hardened so much for so long, and so after 3 rounds he'll have to let go.
Poison / Neutral / 95% / Single / 5% initial action, 1% keep-up / Three actions
For each action that the pokemon he's hugging is being hugged, there is a 5% increase of his ability's chances of activating, being activated (5%, 10%, 15%, etc.), maxing out at 35%. It can also activate without contact moves being used, because of the close contact. Also, there is a 5% chance each action that the pokemon being hugged will be mildly poisoned.
3 rounds from end of all effects
You still haven't specified exactly how the opponent can move or attack while affected by Sticky Harden. I assume they can't really move at all, as you changed the effects to three actions - however in the description, you still said three rounds. Also, the chances of his ability activating don't line up with the duration anymore. Since the chances are so dramatically lowered, though, a change to 20%, 25%, and then 30% sounds good to me.
[Louis] (M)
Ability: Anticipation
Signature Move: Adept Dancer
... you mean signature attribute here, right?