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This is the best revamp I have ever done. I would appreciate some crit. There is something wrong with it, I just can't place my finger on what...

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Mewtwo said:
There is something wrong with it, I just can't place my finger on what...

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I think I know. The lines on the inside are all black. No shading. Also, this is solely my opinion, but I think that it might be that it looks sort of blocky because there is no shading with a checkerboard pattern. This is really all a guess. Hope it helps!
 
Well, what a coincidence; I have a Mewtwo revamp I'd like crit on too. It's in my sig.
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I'd like to show this Work In Progress:

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Obviously it's unfinished, and I need help on the shading, especially on the robes.
 
Here, have an overshade/lineless.
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This probably isn't a good idea, but be as brutal as I know you can be. *wince*
 
*Tries to do the impossible in finding mistakes in Peegeray's scratch*

The only thing that I could point out is that it could use a tiny bit more shadow on the right arm/flipper thing.

I never got any comments on my Gliscor scratch =(

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Also can I get some comments on my Charizard scratch?

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Thanks.
 
The outline of the Charizard is... weird. It looks kind of choppy. And the leg closest to us, the back part is flatish. Try making it a bit rounder near the back? The hands are messed up too, but I find hands hard and shouldn't be talking. And the fire is flat.
For the Gliscor, I don't really have much to say, except that it looks kinda dark. Is the outline all black?

Okay, The Suicune. I'll start with your Ninetales based splice. Shouldn't the blade be in front of the mane? The tail doesn't look like it's attached very well. I think that's it, though.
The Absol based one... let's see. It has no paws, first of all. Is that intentional, because it doesn't look good. And the mark on it's forehead is too big and flat.

Still looking for comments on my overshade/lineless.
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It looks alright, but I think that the legs are too long. Try shortening them. Otherwise, It looks good.

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Comments and Criticism, please.
 
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