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Another devamp. :x
 
Okay, all the devamps are fine, but they would look better if they were reposed more to look like what sprites used to in G/S/C or Y/R/B/G

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Onigiri avatar, cute eh? All scratched!
 
Well, for starters, whatever the worm's coming out of is kind of bland and unshaded. Second, the worm's head has a few unnecessary and...unrecognizable details. AND OH GOD, THE FRUIT'S SMILE IS GOING TO GIVE ME NIGHTMARES. And not in a good way, yo.

Starly, that is awesome. I can't find a single flaw with it.

ANYWHO:
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Before I fucked it up.

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After. Not done with the outline yet, obviously.

Crit?
 
Umbreon-dana said:
Well, for starters, whatever the worm's coming out of is kind of bland and unshaded. Second, the worm's head has a few unnecessary and...unrecognizable details. AND OH GOD, THE FRUIT'S SMILE IS GOING TO GIVE ME NIGHTMARES. And not in a good way, yo.
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first of all, which details do you mean? and secondly, how could it not be a good way? |D
 
@ Umbreon-dana: Nothing wrong with the blob, though the lighting seems to "spill". get rid of the highlights in the flatter areas.

Now for mine.

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No reference whatsoever.
 
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A jirachi sprite. I scratched everything except for the wish tags and eyes

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Castform too, I am getting better at spriting I think!
 
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I would be very appreciative if someone wouldn't mind helping me on fixing the moonlight in the water. I know it could be better but I'm not sure how to go about making it better. :/
 
Sorry to be awkward, but I'd like to point out there'd be a blank zone where the shadow of the boat blocks the moonlight on the water.
 
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