Great Arceus, I really need to be on more often. Just quoting from the last few pages because I'm a lazy bum.
Wow, I was pretty terrible back then too. I mean
[this] just aaargh. And I was always kinda proud of that for some reason, probably due to it being the first group picture I drew.
OH GOD DON'T LOOK AT MY OLD ART seriously. I was living my life thinking that I was awesome back in the days, then I saw some old grouppics lying in the bottom of my drawers and *sob*.
IDEAL It'd be cool to make the OS comic-story-thing into an group audiobook. I got the idea from all of the voice clips that were spinning around the early pages of the old thread.
I've actually been thinking about animating it, but have no idea what program to use. I don't have Flash, and I don't know how to use it either way, so...
But audiobooks are made of awesome and win. You have my support!
We could all narrate the bits that we're in or the bits we say. Providing of course that Spaekle/Linooney/Everyone else involved wants to and can. But if it's not, then having someone else read it is fine. Or how about people reading chapters at a time?
I'm actually planning for Spoon to not have any lines, since Spoon is a spoon, so she can narrate the not dialogue part. Which will be politically correct(?) as well, since she's the one who started this club anyway.
Although Kinova would get a ginormous speaking part...
Zora said:
...I'm also tempted to start coloring all the pages, but THAT'S JUST ME
Do iiiiiiit
I'd been thinking about everyone choosing pages to redraw, but this sounds more fun (and easier :D)
:D Why not both?
You've greatly improved, Ice! Especially the coloring -- I really love the shading on the face and neck in the largest picture. It looks realistic and really nice. The only problem you have is proportions though; the head seems a little too big compared to the rest of the body, and the ears in the bottom-left picture seem too big. Otherwise, it's great.
I guess seeing as I'm a new member here, I'll need to post a ref of my sonas, right? So here's a really crappy one I put together in like 20 minutes because a friend of mine needed one-
Persona
Pokesona (an extremely stylised Skymin/Eevee)
Critiques on anatomy would be appreciated!
Anatomy... Not my strongest suit, but I'll try. The persona looks mostly fine; the body is proportional, as far as I can tell. The only problem, I think, is the face; the nose seems to be located too far to the right (but it's not bad enough to be bad, just a bit weird), and the eyes are pointing in different directions and look slightly awkward. The eye on our left is pointing up and to the left while the other eye is pointing straight ahead. Eyeballs generally point in the same direction, and I think it would look better if you tweak them a little.
And your pokesona is adorable~ I don't see anything wrong with it, so yay?
Arylett said:
AHahahaha AHAHAHA HAHA HAHA HA-*shot*
Ahem. Anyone remember where the handy link list went?
And, last but not least, welcome and well come, new members! I don't care how much Castform hates that phrase, because it is awesome and I like it so too bad.